Kia Ora Everybody,
This week we have had an opportunity to deepen our learning intention by learning how to get our reader to feel emotion. And we have also been working on our descriptive language and short but effective sentences. But the main emotion I want you to feel is Empathy and Sadness. Please let me know what you think, what emotions do you feel. Is there anything I could add?
Kind Regards Leandri
Never ending tears run down my face while my soul shrinks and turns to dust, leaving me hollow inside. Carrying my dear child to her death.Thinking about every time I threw her outside for being a bad dog, will never be able to measure up to the pain chipping away at my heart that is going to leave an eternal hole that no being would be able to fill. I slowly stumble into the ever growing corridor to the vets office. I Imagine how horrible I was to my baby girl. And making me feel that all the pain she is going through is my fault. As the nurse sticks a needle in my sweet baby I imagine the first time I met her and suddenly wish I didn’t love her as much as I did to make this moment easier. But we are soulmates.